I like alot of your stuff Baron, it's very frenetic. It seems like it's mostly a stream of conciousness.
Most of my "poetry" is in song form because I generally write it to a guitar melody, but this is one of my favorites called Reflections
I stare into the depths of my soul, and I wash my sins away
Thousands of moments pass through my mind, and those memories evaporate
I trace the lines of the years, betraying a past that’s gone
My face staring back haunts me, and I destroy this image I’ve become
[Chorus]
As the pieces fall to the ground, reflecting what might have been
The truth is scattered all around, reflecting the lies within
The blood falls without a sound, reflecting the misery
Inside the pieces I have found, reflecting a broken me
Thousands of eyes stare back at me, mirroring the lives I’ve lost
I piece together my existence, remembering the choices I’ve crossed
The regrets throughout my life, remind me I can’t go back again
So I let the pieces fall down, to be forgotten where they remain
[Chorus]
And as the pieces fall to the ground
Reflecting a broken me
And as the pieces fall to the ground
Reflecting me
[Chorus]