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Re: New factpile City

Post by Himmler » Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:27 pm

Well it's more like a add by post fanfic/RP but it adds on to the bar and factpile family threads so...IDK

Re: New factpile City

Post by John-117 » Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:39 pm

This should be in role playing.

Re: New factpile City

Post by Himmler » Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:06 pm

Clothing: brown pants, brown leather boots, a brown pen stripe shirt and a white scarf all coverd in a brown trench coat. My hand coverd in a pair of brown leather gloves and my face obscured by a brown fedora.

Weapons: Ice pick, brass knuckles, bowie knife, choke wire, cyanide capsules, and an extendable billy club.

July 3, 2010

Location corner of third and MLK street

Sun is going down and the rot of the city is burning my nostrals every futile gasp for breath this city takes brings it oly closer to death. People try to ignore it, but I do not have that luxary I can feel its death beneath my feet as the scum of the city slowly starts to bubble over in a cascade of se, drugs, and crime. It make makes me sick...I make my to a local bar and ask david for a drink david's a pretty nice guy a real straight shooter if you know what I mean the bar is one few places not touched by the disease slowy strangling this place, but it won't be like that for long. It is only a matter of time before this place too falls into the abyss. I used to live in the estate on the edge of town, but I couldn't bring the people who also live there into the line of fire of what I do. I moved out about four months ago I sometimes drop by they are nice enough to give me a meal I don't stay long. I step out of the bar...night has fallen letting all the rats know it's time to feast on the necrosis that has set in on this city's flesh. I'm walking down magnolia Ave. and see a local pimp trying to beat a women to death looks like he thinks she is not giving him all his cut. He grabs her throaght so shure that he is going to crush her wind pipes. The women no older than nineteen so shure that she is about to die. I come behind him wire in hand. I move silently behind him he sees nothing coming, and at that moment I was shure it was his time to die. I put the wire behind his kneck wrapping it around him as hard as I could seeping the life from his throaght. He lets go of the girl's kneck...she runs away in horror. He struggles for only a few more seconds until his body goes limp. I slowly rest his body onto a street lamp and proceed to mark him for the sum he is. I take out my knife and carve out "womanizer" into his fore head. I quickly leave the scene and go out towarsd Central Ave. to find more animals to put to sleep because the night is young and evil never sleeps...neither do I.

What do you think?

Re: New factpile City

Post by Hitman H94 » Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:30 pm

Whats the point.....

New factpile City

Post by Himmler » Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:29 pm

This is new Factpile city a gritty crime torn city. Filled with prostitution, drugs, crime, and death. The citizens of this dark city are all different...some trying to stop the crime some trying to help the crime, and some trying to lead normal lives. The rotten decay of the city holds many a places where its slowly degenerating populace thrive.

The local bar viewtopic.php?f=73&t=639

A local estate viewtopic.php?f=84&t=351

All places where the meet some good some bad and some just inthe middle...your path starts here...in the concrete jungle that is New Factpile City.